Motion, title and end cards

Open critique. The end card resolves its logo sting as a 230px lockup tucked under an 11px services line in the lower left with the right 40% of the 1920 frame empty navy, so the sting's finale has no focal moment; give the mark a deliberate scale (Ogilvy sets one third of screen width) and position on the card's grid so the last beat lands as the hero.